Final Rating: 3.85. Finished 88 out of 151 entries.

361 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ah Kiet

Description: The white shirt man slept with blue shirt man's wife. Then the man find someone to beat him down. After that...he man who get injured.The injured man want to asked someone for help.

Experience: 2 year student life

Time taken: 2 week


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Robert Zhou:

I think this was well done with a good interpretation! But around frame 250, I'm not convinced that the character in white, who seemed so weak in the beginning, could pose like that. I think it'd be improved by arching the back more, or putting the elbow on the ground. Good work, though!

Nathan Greensmith:

Quite confusing and a bit fast, but not bad.

paul eliscupides:

good poses. maybe you just have to sort out the timing and spacing because some parts are jerky and some floaty.

Bruno de Coninck:

Mouvements are sometime too slow and the moving hold looks a bit off. Did you used a reference? If not, you should give it a try.

Eddie Higgenbottom:

I think the audio needs 3 character with 2 character the second voice is misunderstood. not feeling the lipsync

Kyle Novak:

not a believable concept. and poor lip synch

Samidha Kumar:

nice staging... but work on the holds and timing. A video reference always helps :)