Robert Zhou:

The video quality is a bit poor, so it was a bit hard to see what was going on. At frame 223, it seemed like the guy was floating, which was distracting. But your animation is pretty good, so good job on that :)

Bruno de Coninck:

Very mecanic here, particulary with the character at the end. Try to make more dynamic poses and add more inbetween before passing to spline.

Ben Halstead:

Some good work here! I love her reaction in the beginning.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Work on your poses more, even if this means less of them. Three good poses beat seven bad ones any day. The lack of appeal in the poses you have is mainly due to no rhythm connecting the entire body.

Nathan Greensmith:

Nice shots, and plot, but i feel the characters and their performance are a little lost in the darkness. but still good effort.

Moby:

Too dark enough to read characters faces and expressions

Melissa:

we can not really see the characters who are speaking.