Robert Zhou:

Nice! I think the character in orange could have some more pose variety. Push the poses! It's better done with the other character, which I like. Keep it up!

Adam Momsen:

Setup is all right, though I wonder if the staging could be improved (there's a bunch of empty space on the left).

Posing is good! A bit static since they're sitting down, but there's some good mobility as they speak, especially with the old man. I might try to avoid some twinning in their legs though. Maybe have the legs crossed, or one foot further out than the other?

I like the part where the old man is asleep then wakes up, but I wonder if he shouldn't jerk awake right when the younger guy starts talking? Old guy seems to go from 'asleep' to 'very alert and thinking about things' VERY quickly.

Lip sync needs some work, right now the mouths are very floaty. Try to make sure to hit the carder sounds like the 'm' and 'f' in 'merciful', the 'c' in 'come', etc.

Ben Halstead:

The guy on the right seems to sort of zone out between "Call him" and "See if he'll come save you." Some sort of anticipation, even a blink would help... really though, this is very good!

Bruno de Coninck:

Your character are very stiff. It looks like you tried to make them subtile, but honnestly, I think it might be a bit too much. If you didn't use a reference, I strongly sugget you to use some.

Nathan Greensmith:

Good scene, simple shot, good job.

Mag Magnet:

Good posing on the older man.

Charity Santos:

Made me laugh XD