Comments:
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Robert Zhou:
There needs to be more movement! The characters are too stiff. Keep working at it!
Nikolas Diamant:
They look too stiff, the first guy's shoulders should be down a bit, and they should both move their torso's more
Richard Clark:
Too floaty all around. I would also recommend shooting reference next time.
Nathan Greensmith:
There doesn't seem to be much to this animation and the lip sync needs work, The scene and background is nice though. good effort, keep practicing.
Ben Halstead:
Framing is pretty good but the lip syncs need a lot of work, and some amount of gesturing, however subtle, would help immensely.
Bruno de Coninck:
I think you could try to move your character a little bit more. Even with a very minimalist shot, someone who talk, wil have some micro moves, expressions, etc. For now, there are some moves, but they don't seems to fit the feelings of your characters. I strongly suggest you to try to use references, particulary on very subtile moves.
Kyra Toomey:
Lip sync is to be desired, needs clearer mouth shapes
Animator: tohid razpoush
Description: excuse me
Experience: about 1 month with learning
Time taken: 1 years-self teaching