Comments:
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Nathan Greensmith:
The beginning is great! up until the second character appears then everything goes a bit too fast, so the timing needs work, but good job.
Bruno de Coninck:
Not bad but some polishing could drastically improve your animation... For example, your character's hand seems to hit a wall around frame 40... There is a lot of little details like that that could be improved, but those are just details. It is a good work. Just need some more extra work! ;-)
Melissa:
The second character is moving to much and they need more weight.
Animator: Lim Ni Kok
Description: animation
Experience: 6 month as a student
Time taken: 4 week