Bruno de Coninck:

I think it is a bit over animated here. the facial expression could also be improved.

Nikolas Diamant:

You should exaggerate your poses more

Nathan Greensmith:

A good performance and good animation, no obvious narrative but it's not really necessary here, so really good job.

Liew Jing Ying:

nice animation especially those lipsync :)

Kyra Toomey:

The animation is great, smooth, but everything is always moving. Try holding poses for a bit longer with fewer inbetween to vary up the acting.

Adam Momsen:

I'm onboard with this for the most part... but what the heck is the second guy doing falling down at the end?