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Rival in love

by Ren Zhihe, July Competition Winner!

Final Rating: 8.10. Finished 1 out of 106 entries.

40,889 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Ren Zhihe

Description: The girl's boyfriend is kidnapped by their "friend"...oh my god (≧﹏ ≦)

Experience: 3year

Time taken: 14 day

Comments:

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juan francisco leon:

one of the first places!!!

Reyane Ashtar:

It's really good. It's just the lip syncing in a bit off.

Skylar Zerr:

Really good job. Well done

Sergio Candela Ramirez:

awesome job! :D

Fang Qian Lim:

i like this so much !!! awesome

Sarathbabu A S:

Good appeal, nice work dude,,,.

Bradley Adams:

Very good and a suprise twist at the end. My only complaint would be the female looking static in the closeup shot of the standing man.

Camilo Guaman:

I like the animation is very fluid, what I found weird is to use a female character to deliver a male performance.
Good job!

Jean Lamy:

Nicely done. The animation is fluent and the story is well conveyed in a short clip. Bravo. Just a little bit more time on the lady's lip sync and this would be golden!

Chris Clarke:

Nice animation. The lip sync just needs a little improvement though. I like it!

Ritvik:

winner

Niina Tamura:

The guy standing has great body language!

Erika Krisanti:

Love it!!

Szilard Hadobas:

Great shot! Might need more work on the lipsync.

Lim Zhi Chuan:

Deep emotion element you got there my friend! :)

Andrea:

Good job!
In this case, the audio match the female character!

Anonimator:

The mechanics of the guys movement and your acting choices are great! The only thing that stood out to me as a critique is the lip sync on the girl feels a little disconnected. When she says, "thing is..." is an example, the jaw feels a little floaty, hard to connect it to the voice. Also, perhaps she would benefit from a bit more light on her face. Overall really nice piece, one of my favs.

John:

Very Nice!!

Pallav Sharma:

wow

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:

i think you are in top 3.

Michaela Wadzinski:

The racked focus is really fantastic. It tells a whole story and I really enjoyed that!

Jordan Lewers:

Oh baby, the whole package of animation! It even comes with an interesting story!

Darren Teh:

Nice subtle animation...feels abit weird tho, with the male voice. Love the ending.

Jamie Calvert:

Super Awesome! My favorite of this months competition.

Loved the overall performances and the reveal at the end.

Florencia Irena:

nice animation, the lipsync at the beginning kinda off tho. but i get it the part when she's so sad and makes her lips kinda shake. really love this :)