Comments:
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Robin Tamura:
I like the guys animation but the dragon moves awfully fast for such big creature. I'd slow down the timing to make him feel heavier and mightier.
Anonimator:
Nice acting overall... main things I noticed that could use work are: floaty transitions between poses on the human character, and fast motion on the dragon makes him feel a bit weightless. Some overlapping action may help (looking particularly at when he knocks the bone away at fr 169 ish).
Brett:
First off kudos for using a dragon rig, I've seen a few and they are not simple. Having said that I think the only critique I have is for the dragon, his moves are really stiff, dragons are like reptiles so their movement is more snake like and fluid.
Aisha Kennett:
love the dragon!
Emanuel Siu:
this was tough, 11's rig animation felt great! I like the dragon his animation was a little choppy and timing slightly off. But this was a hard clip for that, I struggled with right times to emphasize as well.
Michael Logar:
Nice idea! I love how he puts away the skeleton at 'things'. the boys acting at the end just doens't fit the tone of his voice so well I think.
John:
Nice use of the dragon rig! Eleven's movements seemed very nice, but some of the dragon's movements seemed a bit fast to me. Maybe not, but I feel like something that big should move, in general, a bit slower. Overall a nice and funny submission :)
Animator: Amy Hook
Description: Jake goes to his most trusted friend Draco, to share his sorrows. Little does he know what Draco has been eating...
Experience: 3 Years Student, 1 Year Amateur
Time taken: 2 weeks after work (in a bit of a rush)