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Marcuss don't leave me alone~~

by 偉業

Final Rating: 4.94. Finished 50 out of 106 entries.

389 views including the voting period.


Animator: 偉業

Description: A doctor talking with the young man who care about Marcussssssss

Experience: 3month

Time taken: 3week


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Nicki Pierce:

I wish we saw more movement/change when we punch in dramatically on his face at the end. The first "shot" is very impressive, nice shadow detail. I really like the kid's movement, lots happening at once but very smooth and human. The doctor's response was nice as well, we get a strong sense of awkward sympathy in his body language.


I like the staging of the first shot, clear what the situation is. Animation could use some accents, overlap, etc. Has some drifting between poses.

Darren Teh:

Feels floaty overall..might wanna tighten the timing a little. I think the back part could be better if its the doc's pov. With the main character looking up at the end.