Final Rating: 4.87. Finished 53 out of 106 entries.

426 views including the voting period.


Animator: Simon Vergereau

Description: At the hospital, a young man is waiting for news of his close friend Marcus.
Confuse of his feeling, he speaks with a stranger that he met in the waiting room.

Experience: one year

Time taken: I did it almost each day of the month, at least 2 to 3 hours each time.


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Sergio Candela Ramirez:

There are some weird finger poses

Jean Lamy:

His left hand moves too much and the lip sync is a bit delayed. Well done though.


Charachter feels like sliding
hand gestures are nice here and there but after 200 animation kinda snaps

Nicki Pierce:

I like the ambitious movements, many of which I haven't seen elsewhere. The end frame is great defensive body posture and the swipe through the hair was great. It felt like you definitely had a great vid reference to follow. However, there are some lipsync problems

Forest Eyster:

Your characters left arm is too jittery. You need some slow-ins and outs, and maybe offset it by leaving it up in the air for a few seconds when they says "... melted shut." and then go into your hair. This might help improve your animation. However, the one thing that I really liked, is that you kept the character alive though out this audio.

Florencia Irena:

i like it when he rub his head! good one :)