Rival in love
by Ren Zhihe, July Competition Winner!
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juan francisco leon:
one of the first places!!!
It's really good. It's just the lip syncing in a bit off.
Really good job. Well done
Sergio Candela Ramirez:
awesome job! :D
Fang Qian Lim:
i like this so much !!! awesome
Sarathbabu A S:
Good appeal, nice work dude,,,.
Very good and a suprise twist at the end. My only complaint would be the female looking static in the closeup shot of the standing man.
I like the animation is very fluid, what I found weird is to use a female character to deliver a male performance.
Nicely done. The animation is fluent and the story is well conveyed in a short clip. Bravo. Just a little bit more time on the lady's lip sync and this would be golden!
Nice animation. The lip sync just needs a little improvement though. I like it!
The guy standing has great body language!
Great shot! Might need more work on the lipsync.
Lim Zhi Chuan:
Deep emotion element you got there my friend! :)
In this case, the audio match the female character!
The mechanics of the guys movement and your acting choices are great! The only thing that stood out to me as a critique is the lip sync on the girl feels a little disconnected. When she says, "thing is..." is an example, the jaw feels a little floaty, hard to connect it to the voice. Also, perhaps she would benefit from a bit more light on her face. Overall really nice piece, one of my favs.
Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:
i think you are in top 3.
The racked focus is really fantastic. It tells a whole story and I really enjoyed that!
Oh baby, the whole package of animation! It even comes with an interesting story!
Nice subtle animation...feels abit weird tho, with the male voice. Love the ending.
Super Awesome! My favorite of this months competition.
Loved the overall performances and the reveal at the end.
nice animation, the lipsync at the beginning kinda off tho. but i get it the part when she's so sad and makes her lips kinda shake. really love this :)
Animator: Ren Zhihe
Description: The girl's boyfriend is kidnapped by their "friend"...oh my god (≧﹏ ≦)
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