Nammi Eu:

I feel the two characters should be facing each other while they talk. The gestures need more work as they're a bit unnatural and not very convincing at the moment.

Ruben Uggla:

Pretty good although I do feel that the movements feel a bit to stiff, especially on the man in red.

Zachary Checkeye:

Presentation is nice but the most important thing in the world to an animator is the performance. Writing this critique, I can't see how much time you put into this, but from the looks of it a bit of time was put into the background. Try focusing more on strong staging and stronger performances, and if you're going to have a camera movement have there be a reason for it.