Laura Owens:

Nice staging, and cool interpretation of the audio! The lip-sync needs to be tightened, and there is a lot of floating between poses. Keep working at your skills though!

Kirsten Schow:

Exaggeration is good, but the movements don't feel fluid enough for the exaggeration. Needs more moving holds.

Aaron McGriff:

Your lip sync needs work. More shape changes and opens and closes. Its missing alot of syllables so its looking pretty floaty. Nice work overall.

Zachary Checkeye:

The characters' constant motions are very offputting, don't be afraid to give them near-stops and pauses.