Final Rating: 4.01. Finished 67 out of 104 entries.

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Animator: Lim Shyu Kyi

Description: The dragon likes apples

Experience: 2 years (Student)

Time taken: 1 month


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Kirsten Schow:

Good action of body mechanics, but the body animation itself is a little questionable. The arm wave around 180 to 220 is very airy and there's no weight to it. Maybe speed up an action at the up or down, make it look like the arm has purpose.


You broke the poor guy's wrist I'm afraid. Be careful about wrist rotations.


The characters look like they are talking so kudos on that :)

The hands could use another pass because they look stiff, mainly the fingers.

Good work though!

Zachary Checkeye:

You've got this thing going on where limbs are moving in these sharp motions while the body is constantly in motion, and it creates a sort of disconnect. And there is more anticipation and weight to the setting down of the crate of apples than the lifting of them.