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Adam Gillespie:
Once you get into the wide two-shot your animation is good, but for the shot-reverse-shot section I would recommend turning down your poses somewhat. To me there's just way too much going on with the characters hands and face and it's conflicting with the mood and attitudes of how the dialogue sounds.
Animator: Subigya R. Tuladhar
Description: A father and son bond. A campfire story.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 2 weeks