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Maryland&lair?What's going on!?

by Ann

Final Rating: 4.62. Finished 56 out of 129 entries.

2,284 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ann

Description: I don't think he understand what's going on...
(me either)

Experience: 1 year (student)

Time taken: 3 week


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jordan Crownshaw:

Let the character's body movements complement their speech. The movements seem rather floaty, and the speech looks as if it was tacked on afterwards as an afterthought. The poses and expressions begin to work, just try and mesh the character and the movement :)

Chris Clarke:

You could really improve this by making timing snappier for some actions.