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Evil Lair? (Work in Progress)

by Kaeli Villarreal

Final Rating: 3.87. Finished 83 out of 129 entries.

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Animator: Kaeli Villarreal

Description: Twin brothers follow a lead on a newspaper on an evil doctor that leads them to, where else? Maryland.
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This is still a work in progress, but this is how far I've gotten on short notice.

Experience: 2 years of 3D animation

Time taken: A week and a half so far

Comments:

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Christine Miller:

At one point one of your character's hands freezes at his side so I would add a little motion there to make it feel more natural

Jordan Crownshaw:

A good foundation for character animation, though the body movements seem quite a bit robotic. The expressions start off nice but feel a little less so later on as the head starts to become a little floaty.