Christine Miller:

I would work more on solidifying the lipsync. Also, he looks kind of bug-eyed during a lot of it so I would lower the eyelids a bit

Jordan Crownshaw:

Some good timing and poses in there! Good use of the body! I like the context :) I think it begins to fall down during the later half with it mostly being a single pose, push that further with some more poses to describe what he's saying and make it more obvious what's going on!

RaffiqRazali:

It would be nicer to show the interaction between the second character

Dave Roddick:

Would be better with both characters