Comments:
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Sebastian Gonzales:
I like it! I think the movements are a bit floaty however which makes the character seem like they're balloons full of air.
Catherine Mullenger:
Love the chicken.
The hit on the table is slightly out of sync with the audio. Try placing the visual hit before the audio hit, just by a couple of frames.
The cleaver in the human characters hand seems to lack a little bit of weight. Delaying the action might be a way to sell this a little more.
Hardik:
Talk Topic doesn't match the turkey chopping.
I'm sorry I didn't notice that on wip post.
-- Ray's Eyes still in corner. Looks like he's looking at right side of that animal.
-- I liked that Scare in Turkey/chicken's Eye at the end.
Amanpreet Singh:
GOOD STAGING, BUT THE OVERALL ANIMATION WAS VERY SLOW. NEEDS IMPROVEMENT IN AUDIO SYNC IN SOME PLACES, OTHERWISE GOOD WORK.
Edd Jones:
Adding the chicken is nice touch. adding more chicken reactions would help this piece.
Leonardo Rivera:
The characters nose on the right has too much movement, its distracting. I think this shot could be better staged if the characters werent side view but shifted more towards the camera.
Animator: Yohann
Description: A nice men have to kill a chicken for dinner but he can't.
Experience: 3 years at school and 4months at job
Time taken: 4 days