Catherine Mullenger:

The key poses are good, and the way you've interpretted the audio is well thought out. But the animation really suffers from the lack of eases in and out, follow throughs, and ovelapping action.

Tushar Khandaria:

can be a lot better

Stijn van der Plas:

The lip-sync could use some work. Not every syllable needs to have an open mouth, when speaking fast a closing mouth can already produce sound. This way the mouth movement could be smoother.
The characters could also become more lifelike if every part of the body is moving. Especially parts like the chest and core.

Leonardo Rivera:

Needs ease ins/outs and some work on timing.

steven:

The little guys movements are too stiff but p like the idea. Just keep going