Jamie F:

Nice work! But I'm a little sure of some of the posing towards the end. Also you never really feel like there's any eye contact between the two.

Kimberly:

I really like the posing choices you chose here however I felt that you could have put in more time for the lip syncing on the screen left character. Another thing that stood out to me is the facials of the screen left character can't be seen very well so maybe a closer framing between the two characters would be beneficial.

Isabelle Dussault:

It's nice, but the two characters don't look at each other at all and it makes the scene off.

Tobi:

I like to movements, but they don't really tell a story.

Andi Pearson:

amazing! the acting of the first character is so great and I love the fumble to hide is hat. The camera movement is phenomenal and I just really love it. Cant be sure, but i think this might be the winner!

Jackie Nguyen:

Nice reaction! I loved the scare you gave him!