Catherine Mullenger:

The expressions on the characters and hand gestures are really nice and clear, and the emphasis on the weariness of you first character is well sold to the camera.

The second time you cut back to the sherif the angle of the shot feels a little off. It might have been worth sticking with a repeat of the first and last shots.

Due to the Sheriff's wonder moustache it feels like a bit too much teeth is on show throughout his dialogue. Might be better to favour larger mouth shapes and favouring the jaw bone over manipulating the lips to avoid that when you use this rig again.