Jamie F:

Could use some work on your ease ins and ease outs but some nice posing going on

Catherine Mullenger:

Nice framing.

The characters seem to move a little too 'all at once' pose to pose, it'd be worth delaying certain parts of the body and overlapping to make everything flow a little better.

With the hand slap at the end the visual hit usually works better if it preceeds the sound.

Amanpreet Singh:

LACKS GESTURE, SEEMED A LITTLE BORING

Kimberly:

I believe that this is on the right track once more time is put in for the inbetweens and breakdowns. The first 50ish frames is the direction I would go towards.

Jackie Nguyen:

Interesting fynamic!