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by Denis

Final Rating: 6.61. Finished 7 out of 103 entries.

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Animator: Denis

Description: Everyone need coffee

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Expressions and movements were on point.

George Perry:

Love the exaggerated movements. The shot from inside the shelf was great!

Henry Barbee:

Solid animation! However, while I can tell these two are frustrated with each other, I don’t really get why. Making the story more clear would help. Also, I feel like the force he hits that coffee cup against the vending machine with would shatter it. This could be fixed by simply using a metal shader instead of one that looks ceramic. Then we wouldn’t expect it to shatter.

Natalie Spangler:

I really like your style but the ending bit feels really overacted. I would tone that down by like, 90 percent. Keep it up though!