Space Chicken:

Great gastes poooo pooooooowf!

Leah M:

Oooh drama

I like the shocked expression of the character in the blue shirt looking horrified. I also like that the light gets brighter as the camera gets closer to the character. I cant tell if its intetional but it looks like all of it's in slow motion. It works though I could imagine he's about to do something and the friend is preparing for the worst. The head tilt at the end with the pose and flowing hair(which looked good) was interesting but a little confusing which leads to a critique.

im not sure what the sotry is here if there is meant to be one. Im not sure what the relation to these two are story wise. But it seems like an intense moment. I think the orange shirt character could use a kittle more expression but otherwise good work!