McKinley C:

intersting choice of usiing the sound as a narration!

Kevin C. Burke:

Really nice setting & lighting. Unfortunately, there's not a lot of animation. The photo and the tie physics don't seem realistic: they'd move much quicker.

Sam Larson:

Nice camera angles and composition. It could use a bit more attention to timing on the tie movement and maybe a bit more character work overall.

Leah M:

awwww

This is so cool I love the lighting and the shadows coming from the mans body. The slight tilt of his body in the direction he was turning is a nice detail. The black and white really works in this sort of old detective style sounding audio. The background setting and even the added newspaper and photo story-telling which you didn't even really need to add puts it all together.

The only thing I feel felt off was the tie. I feels a little to light, like its floating compared to everything else.

Hope he finds his kids big sad

Richard Adams:

Very cinematic. Really strong visuals.

olivia hartanto:

love the concept. I truly feel the emotion of the character.