Richard Adams:

Animation feels very rough, like stop motion. But love the cinematic quality of this. Really strong emotional punch.

Han Elzinga:

the animation seems to jitter a bit during the run, maybe you should check the rendering settings.

Leah M:

Woah this is so cinematic

The camera angles and background all work. The first shot was really strong the run cycle is amazing as well the the splashing at his feet. The second shot is really nice a well with the background being brighter than the rest of the scene. I also love that he trips slowing the camera for a moment.

I think the only thing I’d edit is the how the trip is executed. It feels aggressive yet stagnant rather than flowing with his run. Like his he tripped and put his hand on the ground to catch himself but kept going. But it still worked for the scene. I also thing the last scene could’ve been a little brighter perhaps he’s looking out into the distance at the water but Keep the animation the same. But either way this turned out really well!

C h o c o b i l l y :

Great cinematography / mood ~

J.K. Riki:

Really fun scene! Needs more work, but would love to see you take it all the way to completion. Nice concept.