Isaiah Hoeninghaus:

When the bald character says "maybe it is", that would be a good time to change the camera position and have him turn around, so that the two would then be looking each other in the eyes.

Maria:

An intriguing background, and a nice setting for these two to have their argument. Relationship between them is apparent and brings a different level of intensity to this audio clip.

Timmy Kwee:

I like this acting the best compared to all the other entries, the staging is clear, the gestures and poses are nice at the second half of the animation.

Max:

This one is really nice! You handled the walking and camera tracking really well. If I had to point something out to improve, it would be that from 257 to 443, I wish the redhead character would give a more diverse set of poses, as he kind of just repeats the same one for the whole line and it gets a bit boring. I also think your animation could have done with another lipsync pass. Awesome work though!

Julian Dill:

this is a great animation, however there are two things that could be improved. 1. the lip-sync. 2. the eyeline for the character on the right. it doesn't look like he's looking at the other guy because he's behind him. you could fix that by just moving the guy on the left forward a little bit.

Matt Vera:

Good animation. White shirt guy seems to have too much arm movement up and down around 'primary motivations for cultural development'.