Final Rating: 5.82. Finished 20 out of 79 entries.

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Animator: Gwei

Description: The old man was angry and wanted to leave the family. The grandson persuaded him on the road and finally showed him a picture of his wife, which reminded him of the good times with his wife

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: Use weekend time about 8 days


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Tom S:

Hmm..hard to see at the end but in my mind it looks like maybe a grandmother and grandfather to the young man in the story.


Nice characterizations and relationship. Intriguing finish.

Richard Adams:

That was surprisingly poignant. Wow.

Ben Zingo:

The acting is pretty solid, but the lipsync seems to be off from the audio

Aaron James Mongcopa:

Lyp-sync is very off.


Love the idea! But It looks like you ran into some sort of problem with syncing video and audio. The lip sync doesn’t really match up at all. But I really like the body movement. It’s got a lot of nice small details that are fun to pick out. I think another face and lip sync pass would do it a lot of good. Great job!

Matt Vera:

Cool animation. I don't quite believe the 'weight'. I'd of made a few of the float-ey movements, even in the face of the old man, have a bit more punch to them. Timing seems to need a revision pass. Honestly... its hard for me to say how to make this better, only that I failed to sink into the illusion and see them as real as they moved. The illusion of life was just missed, and I feel like part of that was squishy movements and a lack of weight as they moved.