Comments:
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Tom S:
Hmm..hard to see at the end but in my mind it looks like maybe a grandmother and grandfather to the young man in the story.
Maria:
Nice characterizations and relationship. Intriguing finish.
Richard Adams:
That was surprisingly poignant. Wow.
Ben Zingo:
The acting is pretty solid, but the lipsync seems to be off from the audio
Aaron James Mongcopa:
Lyp-sync is very off.
Max:
Love the idea! But It looks like you ran into some sort of problem with syncing video and audio. The lip sync doesn’t really match up at all. But I really like the body movement. It’s got a lot of nice small details that are fun to pick out. I think another face and lip sync pass would do it a lot of good. Great job!
Matt Vera:
Cool animation. I don't quite believe the 'weight'. I'd of made a few of the float-ey movements, even in the face of the old man, have a bit more punch to them. Timing seems to need a revision pass. Honestly... its hard for me to say how to make this better, only that I failed to sink into the illusion and see them as real as they moved. The illusion of life was just missed, and I feel like part of that was squishy movements and a lack of weight as they moved.
Animator: Gwei
Description: The old man was angry and wanted to leave the family. The grandson persuaded him on the road and finally showed him a picture of his wife, which reminded him of the good times with his wife
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: Use weekend time about 8 days