David Joyner:

One solid way to get started is to try to find a strong starting pose for each character. Currently, both characters are facing the same direction with their feet shoulder-width apart in a very static pose. Try to get some asymmetry in there and connect the characters to each other a bit more.

Odelys A.:

The mouths are hard to view, and the camera angle does not seem dramatic enough to convey a more proper story between the characters. To improve it, you could add more body movement when the characters speak and move the camera closer to them. Despite that, I like the key poses after “I’m not wearing makeup,” since they give more personality to the characters.

Shiwen Li:

this is a really cool idea!!!