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Odelys A.:
The sword movement and character designs would be the animation’s greatest strengths. The elements strongly in need of improvement include the action and the lip sync. Perhaps you could use further reference footage to improve these elements.
Animator: Branin W. Marshall
Description: Eli and Jake, characters from my webcomic, Destruction Inc.
Frame by Frame animated in Toon Boom Harmony
Experience: 4+ years, Freelance 2D animator who graduated from SCAD
Time taken: I spent several hours a day for the past week.