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Kiran Jay Babla:
LOL at the zoom at the end HAHA!
Nice! However, I don't think the close up on her eyes at the end was necessary.
there are some weird part and unsynchrnized bit there and there but overall its pretty amazing
Not too sure about the zoom at the end
OMG THAT ENDING SCARED ME.
Just improve on the camera angles more and you're good to go.
I dont think this is about the animation.
a lot of work, but the rythm is important, you want your action to be clear and the sound to match perfectly, here, it just doesn't work, even though I can see you put great efforts in this
Some parts doesn't follow the given audio.
First thing to do is cut that ending, it really hurts an otherwise nicely animated scene. The cheesy zoom (shaking for some reason on the truck in) is unnecessary.
The last half didn't utilize the sound well.
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