Natalie Wilkinson:

The particles are beautiful. I would revisit the initial drop down as well as the final jump. Good work!

Aaron Rivera:

Looks great, but doesn't really use the shuffling noises through 147-190, and the sword cutting into the ground doesn't fit the crunching noise at 115.

Danny Kneip:

199 is a problem because Stewart appears to be going through the skeleton. The "hop to attention" at the end is very nice and amusing! The sparks from contact of weaponry makes the work more exciting. Stewart's leap (starting at 159) is a little too slow, but the concept of his action in the air, and the momentum, is a good one. If he landed about another foot or two away from the skeleton, I think there would have been more power in his swing, and more believability.

Sajjad Afzal:

animation does not support the sound.

Erin King:

The character animation is decent, but the set is super un-appealing and distracts from the acting.

Saeho Oh:

try to match the sound effect to the motion. good idea. try new camera settings.