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Kiran Jay Babla:
Not bad animation, I think you went for a sorta slow motion bit at the end but it just seemed like the timing was off! Good luck.
Pretty cool! The weight on the big guy feels off. He is bigger and stronger, but the weight of that sword would still effect his body more.
some moves and slow mo times are seems wrong.
heavy character coming and stopping is too good......
don't quite get the reaction at the end, the nose rub could be all you need. Good action.
I really like your camera composition in this piece, it makes for great story telling. The thing that I think needs work is the kick. I think it's great that you have his leg stretch, that's good, but when his leg kicks, his body (hips) is sitting in place. Try to have him lean into the kick and then follow it with the leg stretching out, it'll really give his kick more force and you can really sell it to the audience. Keep up the good work!
Animator: Khursheed Alam Khan
Description: Fight between two enemies.
Experience: 6 years
Time taken: 10 days