Comments:
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Kiran Jay Babla:
A little bit slow and didn't go with the SFX that well. But it's cool.
Louis Renard:
I can't tell if there is supposed to be slow-motion in the begining or if it's just too soft.
Aaron Rivera:
The impact of the kick is too soon and doesn't line up with the crunching sound, and the movement of dragging the body doesn't match the 3 distinct shuffling noises. The whoosh at the end doesn't match the simple stabbing motion of the white ninja,
Natalie Wilkinson:
Your textures and environments are great, but I would have simplified them in favor of refining the animation itself. The killing blow is slightly off beat. Maybe have it implied instead? Nice work!
Caitlin Cooke:
Too even and slow. Beautiful backgrounds but the animation needs more work
ChrisL:
Tired of ninjas.
Patrick:
Second sword strike is too slow. Good sense of weight with the last sword strike into the ground. Decent attempt. Shows potential.
Sergane Sariani:
really too rigid and stiff
Vijith:
why is your action in slo-motion?
Benjamin Berg:
Very slow and floaty movements.
Animator: Leonardo Ferrò
Description: battle of two ninjas
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: a week