by Cyril veiga
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Too much unnecessary action.
The camera movement makes it hard to focus on what is going on. I would also simplify the idea some. This piece has potential, but feels cluttered.
Jesse J. Jones:
The drifty camera is distracting.
I think it ran away the audio proposal. Also I don't get the singer's role in this segment.
Good artwork, though the animation was fairly minimal. Work on creating something more vibrant with your animation and you will have a successful piece.
I don't understand the one guy playing a guitar - notes are flying but no music?
I was a little confused on this one
Animator: Cyril veiga
Description: "Free" it's a little short animation made with anime studio 9, edited on final cut pro.
So basically it's the story of three prisoners working for the jail in the mines when they suddenly got free without planing their escape.They are just free at last.
Experience: i have less than year of experience but i draw since i was ten years old
Time taken: i made it in one week