Caitlin Cooke:

I don't know what he is doing and its impact on the clip

Blond:

i like the idea! I remeber seeing the wip on this one! Keep the original ideas coming!

Jim P:

first part works fine with the body cracking and scraping, but the pings just don't work.

ChrisL:

Eh? Ahhh i get it! He mimicks some noises. The thing that threw me off was the sound offset at the end.

Cuck Man:

Was it supposed to be a mime routine? It was a good idea but you need to work on your mime skills ;)

mithun:

Need little improvements but ya its Different..

Noyan Özkan:

oh no.

Alex:

Not entirely sure what the story is about here. The animation is weak and needs more poses.

Sergane Sariani:

what ??? how is the sound matching in any way ?? I'm sorry, constructive critique : but even without the sound, it looks really weird and unrealistic, not that you have to strive for realism but at least for something familiar, that looks believable, even if it's exagerated or a bit twisted, here it simply doesn't work, at all,

Shark Bait:

haha brilliant