11seconds June comptition
by Qinqing Wang
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PRIYA RANJAN DEB:
top 5. very good.
Oh, you tease. I wish I could have seen the final version.
the pose and style is really solid! keep going at it
Great job! It looks like a few frames are missing here and I'm not really sure what's going on with the bird or what exactly happens at the end, but otherwise this is amazing!
That follow-through with the sleeves is so fantastic. The facial animation is great as well.
Awesome style, great drawings though not sure about the finish (silhouette). Very good timing overall i am impressed.
Great style! Love it! Maybe the character's design could be a little bit more simple in order to clarify their movements, now the audience's eyes are drawn to the cloths and hair rather than their body movements.
that was EPIC !! the effect at the end are a bit too much though, that's why I didn't give more stars...
Oh man, I love 2D anim, especially of that kind of scene. Well done
LOVELY drawings. You clearly have a lot of skill, and the characters were nice and solid throughout. Unfortunately I think it's lacking a bit in the animation department. Your fundamentals aren't strong enough and it's hurting the piece overall. Looking over it one frame at a time it's not anything major, really, just some areas where it would help to pay close attention to change of shape. For example frames 59 to 60 to 61. You go from a wide shape (overall) to a very narrow shape, back to a wide shape. That causes frame 60 to strobe and breaks the movement. Now it's on 1s, so it goes so fast no one will SEE it, but you end up feeling it, and that can be a problem.
Anyway, hope that helps some. All in all you did an excellent job with the draftsmanship and I'm rather jealous because that the part I struggle with. :) Keep going, can't wait to see what you do next!
Great start, then hello I enjoy cake
Interesting. Good effort.
Some places lack the principles of animation..... But nice effort must say.. :)
Animator: Qinqing Wang
Description: martial art fighting
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: two weeks maybe? I didn't to it continuously.