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poses arent too bad but timing could be faster :)
Your story requests a lot of action, but the animation is really too smooth, too soft.
I like the idea, :)
but the jump is to light and to slow. and at the end the hands are in default pose.
keep goning! :)
Overall very floaty and not much emotion conveyed - you need to work on pushing the pose in areas to really accentuate the areas you want to.
It's a good attempt, but I wish you had pushed the poses harder and really gotten the most out of the rig.
poor kid, trapped in the end, so sad :( but more seriously, add more dynamism to it all and it could turn out a lot better
Nice idea .. ! would have been done better ..
Animator: Fabien Collet
Description: an adventurer tries to escape the snares of a temple
Experience: 5 Month
Time taken: not enough time