Final Rating: 3.75. Finished 76 out of 100 entries.

66 views including the voting period.


Animator: Lukasz Dynda

Description: Thief smashed window and broke into the house. He thought that there is no one home. He was wrong...

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: a week


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Kiran Jay Babla:

I think too many camera movements was a little jarring!

Caitlin Cooke:

still needs some polish. too even and stiff

Jim P:

The dragging perspective was great. Some explosions and rubble sounds just didn't match books. a very tough month. Good job

Deli Daniel:


Lukasz Wenc:

nice cloth simulation but camera is too chaotic and animation could be a lot better

Abhik Paul:

In last shot delay of fingers need.

Christopher Lovejoy:

For such close quarters, I'd suggest a wider angle lens. And for the last shot of the guy with the hammer, either cut to him earlier so we see him begin the swing, and feel the effort in it, or else cut to him later, so that we only see the last half of the arc and the impact. As it is it seems like that hammer is swinging itself.

Benjamin Berg:

Great idea but the animation is stiff, floaty and the a lot of the poses are symmetrical.