by Lukasz Dynda
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Kiran Jay Babla:
I think too many camera movements was a little jarring!
still needs some polish. too even and stiff
The dragging perspective was great. Some explosions and rubble sounds just didn't match books. a very tough month. Good job
nice cloth simulation but camera is too chaotic and animation could be a lot better
In last shot delay of fingers need.
For such close quarters, I'd suggest a wider angle lens. And for the last shot of the guy with the hammer, either cut to him earlier so we see him begin the swing, and feel the effort in it, or else cut to him later, so that we only see the last half of the arc and the impact. As it is it seems like that hammer is swinging itself.
Great idea but the animation is stiff, floaty and the a lot of the poses are symmetrical.
Animator: Lukasz Dynda
Description: Thief smashed window and broke into the house. He thought that there is no one home. He was wrong...
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: a week