Lauren:

Could use some post-production polishing. Personally i'd get rid of the camera guides, but really nice animation and holds.

Alex:

Very poppy in places - jumps from one pose to another. You're nearly there but you need to work on integrating the inbetweens so the poses don't seem so out of place.

Sergane Sariani:

hey pretty nice, and fluid too, only a little camera trouble, but it doesn't concern the animation, so still, pretty decent job :)

Erin King:

Distracted by the HUD display. Turn it off!

Saeho Oh:

lovely acting. try to match the sound effect to the motion. good idea. try new camera settings.