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Juan Carlos Vigil:
I think you need to work a lot more on improving the expressions and the overall movement of the characters, they look very "floaty"
You only have 11 seconds -- don't make the audience guess what the situation is. Remember the 3rd principle of animation: Staging.
Animator: Pricilla Pamela
Description: someone who is worried about his contract with the wedding planner
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 2 days