Ben Zettl:

needs a few passes on lip sync spoken words do not match the mouth/facial movements.

Iverson:

This is really good! I know if you had more time this would be totally complete!

Ethan Gettman:

You only have 11 seconds -- don't make the audience guess what the situation is. Is this principal/teacher? Boss/worker?

Roshan Pinto:

there are shrinking of hands .. here and there.. but i still like it :)

Roger Crown:

ahhhhhh...yea..like frame 88 or thereof is not getting the male smaller without a crosscut to her...and she getulates a bit tooooooooooooooooooo much ...at the end.

Simon Edwards:

Watch the head volumes!