The Small Print.
by Shae Dunser
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Love it! The only part that's confusing is when she looks away at "first if you don't mind". It looks like she's looking at someone behind him or something, instead of her thinking or acting sly. You might change it so she's not looking directly ahead at that part. Otherwise, great!
Real fluid, good job!
Careful of the 'whip out a pistol at the end' thing because a lot of other people do it. It's getting a bit cliche.
Animator: Shae Dunser
Description: A hired hand gets himself into some hot water over contractual obligations.
Experience: 2 Years of animation School
Time taken: 61.04 Hours ^.^