Comments:
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Marcus Taylor:
If you're looking to cut your camera angles, I'd suggest using the 180 degree rule so the changes aren't too jarring.
Adam Ellwanger:
Look into the 180 degree camera rule. This will help for your future shots with creating continuity.
Ken Ackerman:
lose the unnecessary camera flopping
Jyrki Kanto:
It's not advisable to jump from one side to another with the camera. (Frame 0 vs frame 100)
Kartikey:
It needs a lot facial work, the movement of some body parts could be more.. um better.
Alex Ang:
to animate dialogue its more in the lips and less in the jaw
Erin Goddard:
Camera jumps and cuts were quite confusing to watch. be careful of the 180 degree rule. Things like that easily distract from the animation itself. keep at it!
Richard Adams:
Very floaty, poor lip syncing. A sure sign you're letting the computer do too much of the in-betweening work.
Animator: aqil ramadhan
Description: Mixing dialogue
Experience: just a little bit
Time taken: 2 days