Comments:
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Marcus Taylor:
Some of your movements are very quick and easy to miss. I'd suggest spending more time in the early stages on your timing.
Pallav Sharma:
I THINK I HAVE LOT IMPROVED .....THIS IS JUST MY SECOND ENTRY .....I LOVE ANIMATION.
Szilard Hadobas:
Hi, I feel some pops in the animation, but the main issue is that the acting beats are not well shown. You need to make sure that the spine and the head also moves along when you change pose. Now it feels the arms living in a different world..
Animator: Pallav Sharma
Description: this is my second entry in 11sec club i just want to say that it is the great club my fist animation video was very immature but in second video I have learn many new things while making the clip i will try hard in the next competition
Experience: 2 months self taught
Time taken: 10 days