Ken Ackerman:

great animation, I think the toon shading takes away from it though. The lip sync on the woman could be improved upon as well.

Peter Dang:

really good mechanics and overlap. Perhaps the facial expressions on the man's face could be pushed more. It didn't really feel like he was uncomfortable cause he was smiling the whole time.

Bailey Sitton:

it had a lot of potential, the character animation itself is pretty good but I would consider not putting a filter on top of the final render

Sam Neale:

Really interested in how you got this effect of 2D. Really nice work.

S.G:

cool ....

Lim Zhi Chuan:

Very batural face expression. You my friend must keep on the good works!

Jyrki Kanto:

The guy is awesome!!
You should have the woman looking to the left in the first shot. Now the camera crosses the line of action.

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:

amazing

Mohamed Kamal:

Good work!

pluto:

nice syle but it diverted the attention from ur animation, which was good

Eddie Higgenbottom:

great animation liking the colorful shade good job.

Christine Rannie:

I really like the pen click the women does. The boy's fiddling with his hands is also a really nice touch. I feel the animation could benefit from pushing the expressions further on the boy's part at the end to make it more clear what he's thinking/feeling.

Szilard Hadobas:

I love the render style, the characters and body animation however the lipsync needs some love. Great job!

Sabrina Winkel:

I see you have worked your very best on this and I'm proud of what you've done. But lip sync needs work

David Alin:

dat cartoon Scanner Darkly feel, well done