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Michaela Wadzinski:
For your shot framing I'd research the line of action rule as well as the 30mm-20degree rule. Both should help you find better framing techniques that will better help your animation shine
Ben Hall:
The lip sync is off and the motion feels a little unnatural need better ease in ease out
Animator: Michele De Donno
Description: Johnny is a torubled teen known in the neighborhood for is his nick name Rusty Dog. One day detective Whiteham caught him for a shoplift and brought him to the police station. The detective start a conversation with a colleague about Johnny
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 10 days