Comments:
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Monica:
Some nice keys and characters, just needs smoothing
Lucky Brown:
Unique style, Somewhat interesting.
Vin Liew:
it drags too much at the first few sequence
Michele De Donno:
I like the cameras that you use for this video
Maxime Gruet-Masson:
Nice stop motion idea but looks a bit akward :/ but it's not bat anyway
Ben Hall:
The movement lacks fluidity and more poses would help alot
Bruno Fabian:
This is a good work, if you had finished the lipsync it would be even better.
Lea:
Pretty elaborate setup... too elaborate probably, seeing as the animation is far from done. Feels more like stepped blocking at this stage. Maybe try something a little less ambitious next time. I didn't see much of a need for the third character behind the desk for example.
Ruben Uggla:
There are parts of this animation that I think are really good, such as when they walk in the beginning, but then theres are bits where the animation feels a lot more choppy., especially when they talk.
Animator: robin
Description: old veteran arrests young man who reminds him of himself as a teen.
Experience: over a year
Time taken: 2 weeks