Dave Roddick:

What's he doing at the beginning?

Tom Islava:

I know that in fr, 272 the guy is supposed to lean on the wall but it it looks like he's in front of her.

Dustin:

Can't really tell where the main poses are because everything is just floating.

Anais Larocque:

The way they move reminds me of astronauts on the moon.. It generally needs a more exciting timming. :) The personnalities of the characters are well defined !

Peyton Leatherman:

All the movements are pretty slow and happen at the same time, try to vary timing! The staging here has potential.